----- Original Message -----
From: Dmitri
Nabokov
Sent: Monday, June 23, 2003 3:19 PM
Subject: DN's corrections of DN
In looking over the
posted Ada translations with my comments, I find that the latter
contain a few slips:
Pt 1 ch 38 p
244
comment 3: "simpler"
for "simply"
comment 5: line 6:
delete comma after "uma."
comment 6,
penult line:delete question mark after "vipit'"
comment 8: after
"revamped this passage." insert "Suggest:"
comment 10:
suspension points after "Erminina" should be bracketed
Sorry.
Aren't there any
other takers?
DN